you are more than my friend
you are my love and my purpose
there is one thing I desire the most
it is you, warm in my hand
I love you the most
you cannot beat that
whatever you say
you are everything by making me nothing
no my love, its good, Its matters of place
Id give all just to hold your hand
to be given my purpose
to love my "bestest" friend
to hold your tender body
up against the bed
with mascara running down your cheek
and legs that will not meet
my dear love and my best friend
whom without I am nothing
I love you my love
I love you my dear
I shall say it forever and never bore of it
I love you forever and ever for me
given to you, a life has been spared
to experience the life that you live
but really, it is a life made towards me
I am now free
free from so much
bondage against this
I am not damned
my beautiful friend
my faithful love
even if you whisper
I will listen
I submit towards your whip
bowing to this
I love it
loving to love
it is sacrifice and bonds
so much more
you don't know but you do
you're so beautiful
I know, you don't think so
but I do
I care what you think
but its what I think
you are the prettiest creature in this world
my love and my friend
who shall own this heart of mine
forever
I long for you my friend
your soft touch
desire of desire
take my hand and press your lips upon mine
stop these ramblings my love
make me quiet
take me, make me yours
I am only yours, forever yours
rest still my love, time will then come
what we long, reality will seep
come in, and then magic shall creep
you are my home
forever is a second without
my dear love my best friend
make me warm, make me sound
ive been cold so long
bitter too long
make me more than I am
I love you more than what you think I can
A contest entry
- Kindred Spirit by jocelynclaire.
400 points, ended November 10, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice.
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Love it...I feel the exact same way...in love with my best friend. She used to be...but not anymore...that's okay though because I'm the same as you, I'll always feel this way.
"Id give all just to hold your hand
to be given my purpose
to love my 'bestest' friend"
This is the moment I'm dreaming of...holding onto...it may never happen again...but she is worth it all...all the gold in the world...all the riches...all the other guys better than me out there...sigh.
"you are my home
forever is a second without
my dear love my best friend
make me warm, make me sound
ive been cold so long
bitter too long
make me more than I am
I love you more than what you think I can"
Loved it. brilliant finish...this touched me. We recently started speaking again and this is the description...without her I'm cold...alone...but she makes me live...she lives in my heart...and my heart lives in hers. The final line said it all for me...she knows no one will ever love her like I do.
I'm sorry this is long...I'd had to let it out. Thank you for this. Emotional more than a poem...but emotion that I have as well.
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