Telephone
its just a fling
it flutters in my mind
I watch it as it flies
and flaps its over sized wings.
Almost flagrantly at first
but once eyes focus in to notice,
every stroke counts.
Flap Flap
Fence line dive,
flies the butterfly.
Comments
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I like the transition in this peice. It flows smothly from one thing to another. It also gives a great image to the reader, like you can hear the telephone and see the butterfly fly! good write!
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Interesting take on a ringing phone! I laughed because my cell went off right when I started to read this! Great imagery.
Warmest,
Mylee
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