At precisely
sixty-two past eight
we had a date.
We'd meet at a popular
dinning place on the beach,
Little did I know then,
the wonderland
I was about to reside in-
You had planned a special night-
a heart shapped box of chocolates,
a single long stemmed rose,
Your sapphire eyes dancing
as you pulled out the ring,
and said,
"Will you please be mine?"
Author notes
"pink ducklings"
Work Bank Words Used:
1. rose
2. heart
3. special
4. wonderland
5. popular
6. sapphire
7. sixty-two
8. beach
9. ring
Please tell me what you think
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Wow this is where land of dreams are made of the use of your word bank is wonderful. It full of hope and desire for a happy future.I thank you for keeping up with some of my poems. I have been so tired lately. I did not realize how being a widow and losing a brother and two friends in the past year has been hard on me. I miss you and ap and hopefully can bounce back to read such wonderful poems. It keep the hope alive. Great work.
Love your sis
Brenda -
Excellent
Oh my sis such a fantastic use of word bank. so very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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What a wonderful use of the word bank. Now I must admit, this made me think. "sixty-two past eight" isn't that 9:02?
Love,
Amera♥
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Precious~
Oh My this is a Beauty of a piece penned
Wonderful use fo the word bank
Wooooooooo Hooooooooooo
Excellent take on the prompt
Love the last line~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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short and sweet i like this alot, isn't 62 past 8 like 9 02? whatever you used it to include the word,
"Little did I know then,
the wonderland
I was about to reside in-"
are my favorite lines
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It a wonderful sweet poem. About love all the wonderful things behind it. I feel you done a wonderful job with the word bank. It kind of hurts to read it soon so after my husband death. It reminded me of all the wonderful moments we shared.
thank you
love your sis
Brenda
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Very, very good.
I like word bank, now that's one thing I can do LoL
Twinsy This is rather very sweet, I love the way you fit all the word into your poem. It turned out great.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is beautiful!!!
Romantic and a delight to read. I would have never known this came from a word bank....not at all forced...Great job!
Lynda
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A very sweet write!
Memories of special times that live within the heart are usually the sweetest..nice write here Nyetta...Dad xx
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Wow Sis, deeply romantic and fantastic use of the word bank.. You have done this with excellence. Best of luck !!
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