Radiance grandeur
perfectly formed;
dressed in black
not mourning
celebrating life;
fragrantly perfumed
exquisite rose
black rose.
Black rose
exquisite rose
fragrantly perfumed;
celebrating life
not mourning
dressed in black;
perfectly formed
radiance grandeur.
Author notes
'The Rose'
Had to put some words to this border inspired by Jeannie D who creates some awesome borders. Thank you my 'Border Queen' 
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
So very well done. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Beautiful description to this Black Rose Border.
"Radiance Grandeur"--Beautiful use of those two words as an opening and closing.
Well Done!
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Your tributes to special flowers are exquisite. I can tell how you like them! The metaphor is lovely. The line fourth to the end I think you mean mourning not morning?
Excellent write!
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Thank you
I hate it when I do that and you read it back and still miss it.Great pick up
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I never received a black rose I bet they are beautiful. Love roses of any color especially red ones. Good write
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What is this one mook
what form is it called a mirrored something. You did a good job of your choice of words to mirror I enjoyed the read, good write.
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I think that sometimes repetition with little twists makes for some fine poetry at times. Like now. smile
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