There’s no way that shoe is a fittin
To the store I need to be gettin
I can’t take the heat
The tars burnin my feet
Pretty soon I won’t walk I’ll be sittin
A contest entry
- Limericks by piccola.
600 points, ended August 7, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol Your poor feet, very funny and I loved it. Good Luck in the contest
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Nice job! I relate to needing new shoes and wanting to sit rather than walk. The rhyme here is great. Thank you for the entry
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Ugh! Can you tell I haven't been awake for very long this morning -- forgot to give you these three dancers...
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I love limericks! You nailed this one, my friend! Too cute -- hope your Monday is better than this implies.
Keep up the good work!
Your friend,
She-ra -
lol. This is a great way to show the true frustrations of a day. Great write, I really loved it.
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