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Duh



I feel that my life is confusing
I don’t do much of my choosing
I feel incomplete
From my head to my feet
This battle I think I am losing

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I hope I did this right

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  • piccola silver member
    August 4, 2008

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    yes, you did it right. Limericks are usually funny and this is kind of sad, but I don't think humor is a hard and fast rule.