If you listen, you'll hear,
Wraths soften angels' fears,
Devils put down their spears,
Aren't we a mixed bag here?
There's no separation,
Just a variation,
In each person's station,
Of self generation.
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ooh, the rhyme was interesting! it was well written, and i like the progression in this piece, great flow too! honest. keep penning!
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The rhyme is good, although some of it seems sort of forced. Maybe it's just me
But still, this was good.
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