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Innocent

Stepped out into the room ... Breath caught in mezmerising doom ... The heat of eyes saught my soul ... My thoughts weakened beyond my control ... I need to rest ... Drunken awareness heaves my chest ... Something isnt right, I only looked into your eyes ... Am I hypnotized ... Sleep , yes thats what I need ...  my purity left to bleed ...

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  • LoneFairrie
    August 3, 2008

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    Wow! That was excellent! Crystal swans fasinate me. I'm not sure if you were going for Crystal or Amber, but I can see either, well only one line uggested it might be amber, but its was deffinatly awesome.