A son who keeps me sane each day
And always loves with his whole heart
I would just like to take this time
You’ve been my world straight from the start
I’m glad you share your light with me
For I do cherish your smile
And I still can recall back when
You where just a little child
Thanks for being the best son Tim
And for granting me joy each day
Know I love you my son so much
And I’d just like to proudly say
You are the rock within my life
My son, have a Happy Birthday!
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An excellent dedication! Ecellent poetic technique
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This is a wonderful tribute to your son, i know he appricated that you wrote this for him,my son's hugging me right now keep up the writing,
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smiles found within that sunshine of the day where love is shared in both lifetimes!
It's good to see those smiles my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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First of all, this is so wonderful...I just adore this write..Happy Birthday to your son...
Now..did we not just do this a year or so ago?
Why must they grow up!!! STOP THAT!!! oh and go to your room..lol
jk....have a beautiful day....you deserve it...smiles
Many blessings to you both!!
Sister ~A~
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my cousen is ur step bro?!!..jees I am dangerously related to u
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Timothy (Poeticpieces) ....I need another nephew!!!
and your Dad is my Brother????
Do you need another Auntie?
Lynda
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Awe, Thanks.
I must say, I would love that!
But also, I have to say, I'm hardly ever on here.
So I'm not so sure how far that would be to you.
But my dad only says wonderful things about ya.
So having said that, I leave the choice to you.
Timmy Jr.
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This is so sweet and beautifully written...A wonderful dedication to your son Timothy Jr...
They grow up too fast!
I know he loves this poem and loves his great Dad!!!!!
to my sweet Bro and happy Birthday Timothy!!!!!!
Lynda
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Awww, this is a blessing to read. First allow me to say Happy Birthday to Tim -- I can remember being 17... lol ... what a time in my life that was!
I'm thrilled to hear you had a fantastic day -- and I'm honored to be a part of it by reading this poetic piece of parental praise!
You warmed up my soul w/ this one, my friend, thank you.
She-ra
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Beautiful poem, full of love. Many happy returns of the day for both of you!
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What a wonderful poem for your son. Absolutely stunning piece of work. My, I wish all fathers treasured their children as much as you treasure yours. Love the words, the style, the rhyme and the rhythm that kept me moving with it.the first line was a excellent start, good sentiment there. I bet your son loved this. It would be the greatest gift to recieve from a parent. Great picture of your son. Love your Dog! I had one like him, named Shep. Besides that, i believe you are a great poet and should continue to write such great stuff. You won me.
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This is so beautiful Bro!!! Such a very sweet, sincere, and heart felt piece of adoration for your 'baby' - for he will always be that... You are an amazing person, and I am sure that you are an incredible father... I can see it, feel it even. You are both lucky to have such a great relationship. Much love to you both!!!
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You're so fortunate to have such a wonderful son, Tim, and he's just as fortunate to have such a loving father
Your poem is filled with your heartfelt feelings of love and companionship. It's a beautiful, poignant piece.
May you both be blessed with many more birthdays together
Dee
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Oh! this is so beautiful and just so full of love for your son.. I really loved the feel of this.. And you can just feel such a strong and wonderful bond here in your words.. I really enjoyed reading this.. It seems like you two are both very greatful for each other.. which is a wonderful thing!! thank you very much for sharing!
Angel
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I hope your son has a very happy Birthday full of love, hope and wonderful dreams. A big cake full of love and a birthday presents that rocks his socks off.
I feel he blessed to have such loving parents who adore him so very much. This made me cry is was so full of love. This is pure and simply a lovely write.
Love your sister Brenda
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Thanks Dad
You know we are like best-friends, with mutual respect and love for one another. I cherish our days shared together, and those midnight movies too! Thanks for the lovely, heartfelt words you've penned for me here Dad. I love you too! Always, your son, Timothy aka poeticpieces.
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Happy Birthday to you boy,
May you have a blessed day.
See you enjoy a two wheel toy
and ride along like the wind today
Peace to you and all you do,
I wish you happy and well.
You dont know me but i do you,
and I think Tims son is swell.
SO Happy Birthday Dear
I wish you one every year.
Hugs and kisses from me to you
and send me some cake to
Happy Birthday Hon
Love
Passionspromise
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my dearest brother and friend my tears rain for i know the remarkable strength he gives each day and to be a incredible gift each day is unsurmountable in the power of faith and love you both hold dear for each other. I still can't believe my nephew is 17, it seems like just yesterday he was becoming a teen. much love always to both of you and many blesings eternal. I am sooooo very glad he had a great time and a great day!!!
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Excellent
A very loving and touching creation for you son. It is such a thoughtful birthday poem. Thank you for sharing.
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