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Ride:Unforgotten

How sweet your smiles taste on my wandering tongue
Here's to being young.

When I awake with the sun I dare not regret
This is a ride I will never forget.

Tangled sheets and beads of sweat
Thanking God that we have met.

I try to stay quiet and not release my moans,
but the intensity has grown.

Finally we've reached the finale
Your pumping heart feels so good on me

I wrap myself beneath your cover
As of yet, you are the best lover.

You whisper sweet words and I conceal dear thoughts
Thank God, we didn't get caught.

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 3, 2008
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    I love this and the ending was great!