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Drained Days

- Daily I move around, And during this I am tired and weak.
-- I am pushed around, slammed to the ground by people that call themselves my friends.
- Stuck in between, feeling as if I want to scream. I duck-and-dive to stay out of fights, knowing my rights, I continue to go on.
-- Love stuck, but stricken with hatred by others, feeling the connection I shift and move about, feeling the lift and beating of my racing heart.
- I feel drained..

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  • Simply Kristen
    April 19

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    We all feel this way sometimes. You captured the feelings of not only you but of others as well. Good job.

  • HopelessRomantic8
    January 14

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    YAY! ^_^

    HAHA. You've asked for blunt, i'll give you blunt...welcome to high school...
    [[although this isn't really a Welcome persay...i do believe you catch my drift. ]]

    I agree fully. It's not a very easy to deal with. Props to the fact taht instead of physically expressing anger, you came back and recorded your frustration in a great write!!

    nice to see you have writes i[[among others]] can relate to.


    • Hopeless Romantic09
      January 17
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      Lol..Thanks I guess, I drather pull back my fist and express myself in write...
      I've always claimed that I'm more of a lover than a fighter, even when I have my times when I'm willin to destroy people.

      Thanks for your comment.
      ttyl.


  • x-Valiant-x
    September 30, 2008
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    wow, this is really good,


    • Hopeless Romantic09
      November 12, 2008
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      It was a while back when you posted your comment, sorry for the lateness. Thanks for your comment I really appreciate it.


  • peridotPixi
    August 20, 2008
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    This is a great poem, i love the thoughts and the feelings you have expressed here, we all have those drained days and feel like crap afterwords and when your are no where around then you come to AP where you have great friends like me, once agian, different line breaks would help this poem,
    keep up the writing
    ɛiɜ ~Amy


    • Hopeless Romantic09
      November 12, 2008
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      It would be greatly appreciated it you gave an example of these line break ups. As Ive told a few people, I'm not to well int that area when writing poetry. But also, thanks for the comment.

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