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It seems a starless night, at first
The clouds lay low in the sky.
What are they hiding from?
Pushed so far from the light of the moon...
I walk underneath them,
staring up.
I run into you
Into the light.
Tonight I am the stars.
There is no need to hide

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  • Grateful
    September 2, 2008

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    this is really a beautiful poem...clouds, stars, moon, and the light...divine elements of nature...i really enjoyed it...keep writing...all the best...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Nice,

    A wonderful piece to ponder upon and reflect.
    Thanks for sharing, I really liked this little diddy!

    Bravo, Timothy