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Tears In Our Eyes

You sing to me your words of love
You tell me I'm the one
The one you want to wake up to
And come home to when your day is done

Caress my face and tell me
This is how you'd spendy our last days
If only everyday was just this good
If I'd be yours always

I smile and your eyes light up
At the thought of us for good
Forever and for always
But only if I would

I tell you that, my darling,
You're all I'll ever need
I couldn't have dreampt you better
You mean everything to me

Your eyes begin to sparkle
And in your heart you know
That I'll be with you forever
Your face starts to glow

You say you'd never be happier
Never have you been in your life
The best thing you could do
Would be take me as your wife

It's the one thing I've imagined
The dream I've wished would come true
That one beautiful day
When I would be married to you

You gently hold my hand
As you pull out the diamond ring
You promise me all the happiness
That our life together can bring

As you place it on my finger
The tears roll down my cheek
You kiss my lips so gently
Your touch now makes me weak

You look at me, so loving
The tears form in your eyes
You know we'll always be together
I'm forever by your side.


6:06pm
03 August 08

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    you had one spelling error, but otherwise this is really good and sweet
    thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥


  • SexyAngel0418
    August 9, 2008

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    awwww... this is a sweet poem!!! I really like this one.... It makes me wish the day my husband proposed to me was this romantic... LOL... It was good too though... Thanks for entering and good luck!

    Beth


  • Manda-Lou
    August 7, 2008
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    Option 1 about weddings I hope proposals work too!