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The Sound Of My Heart Breaking

A ripping sound of my heart breaking,
A cutting pain that makes me scream,
Salty tears soil my stricken face.
The beating of my heart tells me im still alive.
but the absence of any thought tells me different
Wake up, my soul, wake up just once more.
Because it's the sound of my heart breaking.

An explosion of emotion knocks me off my feet  
Weeping on my knees, I seem to know that it's not ending
i lift my hands to God above me
and hope he understands me
wake up, my soul, wake up just once more,
Because it's the sound of my heart breaking.

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  • drumbum7856
    September 21, 2008
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    lol thats supposed to be breaking..not beating..wow I can read my own work..

  • drumbum7856
    August 3, 2008
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    Well here it is, folks, the sound of my heart beating. Comment good!