Give Me Affection, Love Me....

It's not just you I need

compassion

respect

Love

kisses

& Hugs

Within the night

I long to hear

sweet whispers of want

in the morning I want to

wake, embraced by you

flowers

candy

bottle of wine

cards signed "I love you"

romance- pure-sensual-spontaneous!

Give me affection, love me....

Author notes

Free write, write freely.

Contest rules

-50 words or less
- poetic device
- left align
- tastefully sensual is fine
- no reservations
- if you use an image, please credit accordingly
- create outside the crate

Pic from Photobucket

A contest entry

Women poets only - I don't just need a man, I need love. by paulcreates. 600 points, ended August 5, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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Swangrnv
August 4, 2008
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very beautiful
and as the saying goes..love.. is all we need.
lots of luck in the contest.
cricketjeff
August 4, 2008

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great to see you doing new things

Pure romance in free verse!

T-riffic
Griswold
August 4, 2008

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Very nicely done sweetheart, last time I checked though, any flowers were supposed to be donations to a favorite charity instead. Love you baby, very well done as usual....Scott
poeticweaver
August 4, 2008

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-Hugs-
You are cherished, but I'm quite sure there is more room in your heart for more love. For the way you love deserves a 100 fold in return, because you are sincere, and love with all your might. Thanks for being you, I love you!

-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
lowercase prelude
August 3, 2008

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This is simply amazing. And the format of this piece (especially the bg and the text) really added to the poem.

Well done.
Riftkin
August 3, 2008

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This is awesome sis... I love how you did this..

best of luck to you

not sure if you will need it
as this is outstanding

Joann
hotchocolate
August 3, 2008
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I like this! Love the background to!
Good luck!
Volfeng
August 3, 2008

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OMG!! I love this one, it's exactly how I feel good luck in the contest,
I love you.
paulcreates
August 3, 2008

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A nice sensitive and artful write here. Thank you for your entry. I'll be judging in a couple days.

Paul