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marry me?

swirling minds reveal thoughtful desires
thinking about you're touch
putting together your face in my mind
until all the pieces fit together

I miss those days when your hug was right there
when I could see you at whim without a thought
when everything just seemed so much easier

but let's not go back to the pain
let's live in what we have
this connection that will never end

you're the pea to my pod
you're the love to my desire
you're the kiss to my hug

when your touch cannot be had
all I can do is dream
dream of what can be
dream of what should be

there's that day
that one faithful day
when it'll all come back
when we meet once more

looking at it now
it's doubtful we'll forget where we came from
forget what took us here
but remembering is only half the fun
it's time to live it

so with an iron curtain held between our souls
there's nothing we can do but wait
for all curtains must be opened one day
and ours will come soon enough
our day will come soon enough

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 2, 2008

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    "you're the pea to my pod
    you're the love to my desire
    you're the kiss to my hug" aww you lucky jerk-face loljk i love this line


    • exithere
      September 3, 2008
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      thanks those are actually kimya dawson lyrics that fit perfectly with that situation.


  • luna-midnight silver member
    August 3, 2008

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    awww..i love this, its gorgeous, wonderful write and good luck in the contest, thanks for entering
    Stephanie ♥