swirling minds reveal thoughtful desires
thinking about you're touch
putting together your face in my mind
until all the pieces fit together
I miss those days when your hug was right there
when I could see you at whim without a thought
when everything just seemed so much easier
but let's not go back to the pain
let's live in what we have
this connection that will never end
you're the pea to my pod
you're the love to my desire
you're the kiss to my hug
when your touch cannot be had
all I can do is dream
dream of what can be
dream of what should be
there's that day
that one faithful day
when it'll all come back
when we meet once more
looking at it now
it's doubtful we'll forget where we came from
forget what took us here
but remembering is only half the fun
it's time to live it
so with an iron curtain held between our souls
there's nothing we can do but wait
for all curtains must be opened one day
and ours will come soon enough
our day will come soon enough
A contest entry
- Marry Me? by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"you're the pea to my pod
you're the love to my desire
you're the kiss to my hug" aww you lucky jerk-face loljk i love this line

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thanks those are actually kimya dawson lyrics that fit perfectly with that situation.
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awww..i love this, its gorgeous, wonderful write and good luck in the contest, thanks for entering
Stephanie ♥



