raise from the past
the very dead
and the gone
bake them from clay
craft them from bone
put them on display
I want to see them dance
like the shadows
beside a fire
like the lightning
in your hands
A contest entry
- ...of clay and bone by zochit2me.
1850 points, ended August 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Damn!
This is great!
I am going to have a hard time in this contest, I can tell
A lot of good good entries and this one is certainly there with them...
One suggestion..
bake them from clay
craft them from bonethis one word change to me pulled this stanza together
and coheised it.
Of course it is your poem and your call.
Nicely done and I love that title.
♥Becky♥
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I want to see them dance
like the shadows
beside a fire
like the lightning
in your hands
gorgeous imagery.
i loved it!
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