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Wow, Any One Around

Wow a glass half full of Champagne
Is anyone hanging around
I've never tasted Champagne
I'll see if any one's on the ground

It seems that no one else is here
I'll just take a sip or two
Swirl it around inside my mouth
Gulp, sputter, spit, phew

I'll have to get some water
To wash away the taste
Help me to quit coughing
Boy was that a waste

I think I'll stick to soda
It's much kinder to taste buds
I can drink it all day long
I don't ever want to taste any suds

You can have your Alcohol
I'll take soda any time
No worries about driving or anything
Now doesn't that sound divine

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  • PianoMan
    August 4, 2008

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    Wow! I like this poem alot. I think this is probably how I will be when I get older too. I wish alot more people felt this way too. There would be alot less problems on the road thats for sure. Awesome job!


  • Angel Felice Seals
    August 4, 2008

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    Wow

    this made me laugh i really enjoyed this it  was very good i loved your flow it was outstanding you have talent it made me smile .


    • Katie Lazette
      August 14, 2008
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      Thank you Angel Felice Seals for the trophy and your kind comment. So glad you enjoyed reading my poem...Katie