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Jealous Nature



Earthly love so soon corrupts,
And others peace, it interrupts:
The jealous human nature fears
A loss, if other love appears.
It’s not our choice; second place
Means loss of power, loss of face;
To give up our own sovereign crown,
And sense the ties that bind, unbound.
If our magic touch seems gone
We think it's best to move along;
Place faith then in another heart,
Till death or some new love, doth part.

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  • Silent Whispers
    August 4, 2008
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    wonderful

  • Silent Whispers
    August 4, 2008
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    A master piece

    It captures the the inept human/animalistic nature of the human mind. I'm working on a rejoinder. its a master piiece.


  • Ken-Maverick
    August 4, 2008

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    This poem is so true,
    "The jealous human nature fears
    A loss, if other love appears.
    It’s not our choice; second place
    Means loss of power, loss of face;
    To give up our own sovereign crown,
    And sense the ties that bind, unbound"
    Love these lines


  • aanika
    August 3, 2008

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    Earthly love so soon corrupts,
    And others peace, it interrupts:
    The jealous human nature fears
    A loss, if other love appears.

    wow. the rhyming and flow are FLAWLESS.
    i loved this .
    good job.