Drained underneath irrigates;
senseless illusions become thawed.
you keep on trying; I'll keep on falling;
Until your hand I reach and take.
Drastic precautions must be required-
may I inquire why do you slump?
Afeet and arisen; tumbled and crawling;
I will verve you to jump.
Driven under temptation;
twinging your vessel won't settle me down;
Constructive atrocities,
waging my war to settle for no crown.
Drawn apart; wishes from hopes;
Brain in tussle, transfromed into clump;
Aberration disputed; I'm obliged to use salvation;
With such blast I'll lie completely numb.
Mouth open, ready for the spectacle;
Prosthetic resolutions seal away the concequences
of the inmune distortion that was brought up
for and by love.
Desired apprehension
Rivaled questions
Imprinted routines
Vindicate out toxic love
Enamored by conniving lies
Nurtured by fixed vendettas
Unable to share peace
Negative thoughts run inside
Deepen even more every night
Enduring this hateful love still
Rendering our last rites; a lie...
~♥~
Author notes
Inspiration brought down by;
Seether- Driven Under....
Writer's Block ppl... hope you like!
XXVampireeyesXX
A contest entry
- Darkness and Love, Demons above by AbandonedAngel.
350 points, ended September 19, 2008, 32 entries
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extremely well word and the entire vibe of the poem! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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hummm... I think that the picture helps explain the poem better. The first time I read the poem without looking at the picture and I was confused. I re-read the poem after looking at the picture and it made much more sense to me then.
It's a good write.
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Omg! I could feel the love and emotion as it flowed down the page! Well done! Thanks for entering
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this is amazing honey, i love that song!
but this is like
and your descriptions are so in depth destiny i love it so so much, hope your ok,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
Wow. Very descriptive words. I like the imagery in this poem. Great job.
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