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It's You

Take my hand, my love
for you already possess my heart
and slip down to one knee
so we can never be apart

Whisper you love me
hold me close and dear
promise to love me
and keep me through out the years

My hand is yours honey
and my heart is too
so kiss me with the passion
that can only come from you

I'm ready my darling
I want you forever in my life
so when you want to be my husband
I would love to be your wife

Ask me when your ready baby
I have a "yes" just for you
I am head over heals, Bryan
and I would LOVE to marry you.





Author notes

Yesterday, Bryan asked me if I remembered that feeling we felt the first time i told him I loved him. That feeling where you swell up with warmth and happiness and feel like nothing could ever bring you down. I know I always talk about how i want to marry him to him... but i just love that feeling and I know the second he asks me.... its going to feel nothing like that... It will be better. way better. I just love him with all my heart. I cant wait for forever to start.

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  • XxXEmoRainDropsXxX
    August 3, 2008

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    awwwwww!!!!!! that is soooooooo freaking sweet!!!!! i LOVE that!!!! omg!!!! goodness! lolz. that was sooooo sweet!!!! i love it!!! good job!!! its really sweet!!!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    omg, awwww, this is just so flipping sweet
    thanks for entering and good luck
    take care, Stephanie ♥


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 3, 2008

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    Wow, this is very beautiful and
    hopeful of a wonderful life ahead!
    I do hope that your wish comes true
    for you very soon. Good luck to you
    in this contest and in life! Thanks
    for sharing your feelings here!




    Jeremy0826