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Call Me Once Tonight

Call me before you leave
Remind me twice of the times
When we knew this wouldn't last
The flashes blink fast and blinding
Can you still reach your mind
But now its just the past

Oh, Heroine I used to know you
So beautiful enough to cover the wounds
Knuckles ripped and bruised
But I did it all for you

Hit the bottle once begin to sing
Scream out the pain and of the rhyme
I took this memory cast it stone
Hold me tight tonight as my hands start to bleed
It feels so good to know you again but why this time
I don't want to be like this leave me alone
Because I swear to you that I will be fine

Oh, Heroine I used to know you
Beautiful enough to cover up the wounds
My knuckles ripped and bruised
But I did it all for you

They just want to know what I've done
Can't you just load the gun

Pull back gently please
I want to cherish this memory
Just hold you me close
Tell me something I'm dying to know
They just want to know what I've done
But to them I'm just my stage name

Oh, Heroine I used to know you
Beautiful enough to cover up the wounds
My knuckles ripped and bruised
But I did it all for you
In my vains one last time we'll dance toe to toe
But to tell the truth I don't want to know
Who I am

Who have I become?

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  • Wow, this is an amazing write! I am just curious what genre of music it is intended for. My favorite lines are:

    Hit the bottle once begin to sing
    Scream out the pain and of the rhyme

    and

    Pull back gently please
    I want to cherish this memory

    Beautiful! Great job!