I need you
There's no if's or but's
I can't breathe
Please I need you
Please I beg you
I'm on my knee's
Please... a thousand times, please
LOVE ME!!!
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simply amazing
what is this....
from where did you get such a lovely imagination..
I never thought that feelings like these also can be put in the form a beautiful poem
I loved this so so so sooooooooooo much
keep writing
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Expressive
Love hurts, because it's not easy. Love is something undefined that we must define for ourselves, and to love with such expression, to feel so much, is the only true way to know that love did or does exist. Glad you're back to writing again, sorry the heartbreak that it took to make you write again!
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Well done, a great look at your feelings. Love does hurt.
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ouch. i know what that feels like. hope you get better!!! if i can get through, so can u. good luck!!
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Feel better soon, Diamond Butterfly, I feel the raw pain from this.
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I keep changing it.. I cant put into words exactly what I feel right now.... this is it!! Sorry to be so blunt with it... not even rhyming.. not like me!!
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