The road to salvation is just ahead
Take your car and take a long nice drive up to heaven
The angels are in the clouds
Watching, waiting quietly
The hills are filled with demons.
Taunting, lying.
Your life's a map.
Author notes
I just thought of this. Might add more.
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- PIC Inspired Prompt 40 word quicky by Unconscious-Energy.
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Comments
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Very interesting take on the prompt good luck..
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I walk in those hills at night and the demons must be scared of me
for I do the taunting but I do not lie.
My car can’t possibly make it to a cloud, let alone heaven.
In my dreams I fly like an angel but I have never met another.
Lying is a human trait, more often it is simple misconception.
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