You tell me who I am
You say you own me
you tell me im nothing
your such a fucken bitch
I hate you
When you found my scars
you blamed me
your so naive
How could you not know?
Its all your fault!
You took my life
You killed me
From the inside out
You hid the evidence
But your secrets out now
Im gonna ruin your life
Im going to humiliate you
like you did to me
You lied to me
You turned me against everybody I loved
Now we are back
And you will disapear
without a trace
You wont ever come back
I can promise you that!
I wont ever have to see you again
You ruined my life,
Now im going to ruin yours
You bitch from hell
A contest entry
- A Darker Poetry Contest III by -BlackKnight-.
525 points, ended August 11, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What in Christ in this? I'm pretty sure I didn't want emo shit, and that's exactly what this is. So, you either didn't bother to read through the rules, or you wrote this as a direct contradiction to said rules. Either way, it's fucking terrible.
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nice....love it...
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OUCH!
I remember this feeling all through the divorce! Now I found a great partner and life is much more fun. I hope you can forget this pain someday! The Shaker
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Nothing really new to say to this that I haven't already said on the previous poem.
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