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Even a Monster

Shallow words
Skin deep reassurances

Never showing
Her true self

I dig deep

Past her meaningless conversation

I hear the pain
The edge
The uncertanty
In her voice

I see the hurt
In her eyes

How could someone
So inhuman
So ruthless
Have these real feelings
I spy inside

Even a monster
Has a human side

Author notes

" Shallow becomes the deep " by Reptile Lady

I think I might be infected by "Breaking Dawn" the newest addition to the Twilight Series...the whole vampire thing is all I can think about.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Creative darkness reaps within this write
    Eerie piece of written art
    Enjoyed reading your AN too
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie