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soft shadows



long slow moments
of softer lights and shade,
nudging ~

I stretch out into shadow,
touching where my soul resides
and remember what I believe in





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Prompt: observations made in solitude
25 words or less

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  • tara wilson gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    in moments like this, in shadow, yes, we need to remember what we believe in...I really enjoy where you went with the prompt & your thoughts that went into this poem, thanks so much for this entry


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    Powerful moment described. Great take on the prompt.
    Thanks for this.


  • Re-invention silver member
    August 3, 2008

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    I think it should be believed in since is remember nicely done... such a short piece yet so beautiful! good luck!


  • zochit2me gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    This is fantantic!

    Truly full of imagery and self observation.

    I stretch out into shadow,
    touching where my soul resides

    Great line here.

    ♥Becky♥