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Vision Quest

Thrice through those clouds of fog,
An image of a rider
shining mystically in an armor of silver
rages,
Let the vision quest begin,
And a star is revealed
to a place far away
in the land of dreams
where faith thrives
invoked by powers
of magical realms
guided in the veil of the faerie
inspired by a heart
that has the wisdom to
look beyond the surface of the water
and the ripples that has the power to mesmerize
eyes that search for the rhythm of truth
in a circle of life.

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  • individuality gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly along, if i could i would stay in the magical place of dreams twenty four hours of the day, sadly though i need to wake up and have a look at the real world now and again.


  • angelica silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    Meditation is a great way to go within oneself and see visions that lie beyond our third eye. I love it when I get a vision, it really fascinates me. I remember when repomen79 had not been on AP and we all knew he was dying and we were all worried about him, in meditation I asked to be shown Patric and I was shown a coffin but I wasn't allowed to see who was in it. Three days later AP got the word that he had died and the whole of AP mourned his passing as you would remember Bill.
    Love your poem my friend.
    Love Joan


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    August 3, 2008
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    Very good and it is the truth

    I havent seen you on here in a while. But I havent been here to much myself. I finally had my back surgery, still recovery from it. Vision Quest is how we find our new name. how the future look and who will died on the day that it is a good day to died for God & his people. You did a great job on this one.. What tribes are you from. I have forgotten. Your friend
    Morningstar


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    Absolute beauty in a poem and well done!

    Your poem speaks of many wise old truths, customs, and
    beliefs present and practiced contemporarily too all
    over the world in many faiths.
    I think meditation especially a vision quest gives us the
    ability to raise above our "physical and emotional circumstance" as illustrated in Jacobs Ladder and climb
    a rung higher to give us precious insight, symbolism,
    and a bold reminder that no matter what religion, faith
    custom or belief, the circle of life, and the thrones
    that surround speak wisely to our souls when we take
    the time to simply Listen without the baggage of
    physical and emotional circumstance.
    Write on!
    Excellent topic for a poem!
    ears/Seattle