love is blind

beyond reason
knowing no boundaries
lines of race are blurred
when viewed through love's true eyes

forbidden, say nay
blind passion, love unconditional
heart's pure desire lies within
one's soul

Author notes

PHOTO IS PROMPT:
15 POETS
30 WORDS EXACTLY

For Confused Angel:
Option #4: write a poem about a forbidden or restricted love <3

A contest entry

Quickie for a Quickie PIF #105 15 Poets /30 words by Roaddog Wolf. 425 points, ended August 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Romeo and Juliet Contest by misshugglebugglez. 626 points, ended November 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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LunaSilverStars
November 14, 2008

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love knows no bounds, may it be color/race, age what have you. ohh and that picture is so cute of the cat and the chihuahua!
misshugglebugglez
November 9, 2008

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ooh! i like it! "lines of race are blurred when viewed through love's true eyes"... i think this poem is really powerful in meaning... i loved it! nice work, and good luck! =]
hugglez!
Roaddog Wolf
August 4, 2008

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I do like the message in this piece you have penned here, and so true are your words

Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
Soft-Rain
August 3, 2008

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This is why i love you! Writes like this have so much of who you are in your heart.

Love,
~Lisa~
Riftkin
August 3, 2008

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This is just wonderful and so full of love and understanding. Best of luck to you with this.

Joann
KayJay
August 3, 2008

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Bravo! A wonderful morality play in 30 words, filled with love! Well done, Tim...
Ken
Thoughts-of-Soloman
August 3, 2008

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This put a big smile on my face.
Well done Tim and good luck in the contest!

Sol
ShaShay
August 3, 2008

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Great content written very well. The pic is perfect for your words. Another nicely done piece. Pen on ~Poo~
XxXEmoRainDropsXxX
August 3, 2008

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wow!! that was really good!!! and the picture, although cute and funny, represented the poem and idea for well!!! good job!! i really enjoyed it!! keep it up!
penman
August 3, 2008
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Wonderful
Great choice of 30 words. Captures the image so well. best of luck in the contest
BuriedTreasures
August 3, 2008
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Wow--very well written!
a lot said in 30 words!
Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!
Ally
August 3, 2008

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Wow you have really captured this in just the thirty words- it doesn't feel as if you needed to say a single world more. Your words are beautifully phrased: "lines of race are blurred". =]
Ally.