The day is here, night is gone.
Tomorrow is far away,
Yesterday is gone
Searching for you
knowing your there
but where?
Where are you my love
The man of the hour
has yet to come.
As i wait in the distance
I hear a tune
Is it the sweet sound of Life?
The flowers are in bloom
The day is beautiful
My heart has lots of room.
Silence
is that
YOU?
Life is so good
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Sweet
A very uplifting poem, sweet and full of beautiful emotions, waiting for that one to light your fire of desire. -
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Very beautiful and sweetly written. You ended it perfectly and drove the emotion across deeply throughout. I could just feel it building and building inside as I read. I have been gone for so long and hear I am back to see that you have blossomed wonderfully in your writing even more.
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Its great that you have returned, I have missed you! I thank you for your wonderful comment, blossomed I dont know I find my writing takes on better when I just write my emotions. Thanks again Grimlathak
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You said in your poem "Where are you my love" I say, here I am. I really like this poem a lot and I'm sure your heart has lots of room.
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GoodKnightPoet
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, very nice of you......
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my best friend is silence.
love the rev papa
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mine too I guess papa, I know him oh so well. He is a goody but he has no shoes...........
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WOW, a very good write about waiting for the right guy. I loved hoe you ended it. "Silence is that you"
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goalsv
Thank you your such a sweet heart you seem to never miss a poem I have wrote. I thank you so much for your kindness. Vickie
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