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Within.










There is pain

in an abrupt abused April.

Turning tides,

were open mouthed so called physicians

playing Russian roulette with my soul.

Talking to the other players,

I was immersed in hyphens and exclamations

where grammar became inflated

and his eyes were a penalty in the game.

The icicles were hanging from my lips

and Florida sunshine

became equipped in my ethereal drugged airport.

Yet,

I didn't make it there;

for the overdose of reality

was too much to bare

for none.

Without a care

the object of frivilous fun

is stripping in flourescent lighting

to make sure that

no contraband was in sighting.

Don't you want to know

about the dog and pony show

or would you rather

elude it to something

thats just unfortunate.

Inside of my jaundice existence,

and perforated skin,

lies a wake up call

for later breakage

that came from a supposition

of within...

.......................

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  • aaaaaaaa
    August 9, 2008
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    This is good! had me gripped throughout.


  • deadheartedkitty
    August 3, 2008

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    wow

    i really liked this it's verry good, i really liked the phrase:
    "I didn't make it there;
    for the overdose of reality
    was too much to bare"

    over all it was bautiful
    keep it up

    DHK


  • aanika
    August 3, 2008

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    Turning tides,

    were open mouthed so called physicians

    playing Russian roulette with my soul.

    wow. your imagery is.. wow.
    i love this.