I am lost in a downward spiral
navigating the river of no return.
My life has no meaning,
no hope or no dreaming.
I just live in depression
of life harsh lesson.
No reason to live, unless hope you will give.
Not forever I'll wait,
for fogiveness for hate.
I am at your mercy.
Waiting, forever waiting
hoping, forever hoping
living, never living
dying, forever dying
dead, forever dead.
A contest entry
- A Darker Poetry Contest III by -BlackKnight-.
525 points, ended August 11, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"Not forever I'll wait,
for fogiveness for hate." -- Oh good God, that's awful...the lines, I mean.
This, as I'm sure you know, appears to be a mix of free-verse and rhyme...I asked that poems not rhyme at all, so this piece won't be considered when I judge. Try again next time.
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