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one simple choice

she felt depressed
thought she might do something against it
cause nothing else helped
so she picked up the blade and cut her wrists

the time stood still
when she used her little friend
no one loved her like he did
why hasn't she done it before?

she's getting stared at
how can such a nice girl
change into such a lunatic
losing all of her friends

for what?
her new best friend?
abusing herself, is that the solution?
should this be normal these days?

she can walk away from this path,
which wasn't right for anyone
it's just a simple choice to make
just say no to the knife

I know this sounds too easy
and trust me, it's NOT VERY EASY
but you will notice
the good things in life

just to say NO

.....yep, I haven't been cutting for like, 4weeks now? and it's all about control

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  • thesefadingstars.
    August 6, 2008
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    I hope you can manage to stay off cutting....and great poem too...loved it...


  • peregrin
    August 4, 2008
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    Wow, very powerful!!!
    Great work!!!

  • Zannah
    August 3, 2008

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    Thats awsome! 4 weeks is a good start! Im proud. If ya need to talk im here for ya. Great write also. Its harder than most people think.

    Zannah