Cascading in those paths
that each of us choose,
Reflected like mirrors
in a carnival room,
But each has a responsibility
that we must account for,
Resulting in that miracle of time
felt by all,
Where each has a place,
And a rhyme,
And a reason,
Whether understood or not,
For in that variable
a choice has been made,
Now it's up to us to live with it
and adapt to the situation,
Isn't that what life is all about ?
Consider the possibilities
which life gives to all.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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I liked this one very much, well done, my best wishes.
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YOur poems are always so thoughtful with such serene qualities to them... even when presenting us with the big philosophical questions
Yet another great write from our resident sidewinder
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nice
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I truly love the words that you have wrote with this poem. It is true, we all make choices. We make our own destiny's. Anyways that is what I believe. With each choice right or wrong. Now I am not saying we cause ourselves pain but I think we all make choices. Thank you for sharing. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Brilliance at it's best.....
'LIFE IS A JOURNEY,
IT IS THE STEPS THAT YOU TAKE,
THAT MAKE IT A GOOD ONE OR NOT'
Many paths are taken during our journey on Mother Earth, our time used to the utmost in each endeavour we start. To be seen on the right path, is the vision of others, we could be walking along on the wrong path for us, but we never find that out until we discover ourselves.
Your words bring much to ponder on, and make the reader sit up and think. An excellent write Bill. Well done indeed.
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hmmm, like the butterfly effect, but being aware of it, and living it every day. awareness of consequences of actions, in real time is certainly the key to maintaining good karma. i really like this one.
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wise wise words!
I loved how you wrote this...responsibility and accountability....whew...tough topics...and you
captured us well..inspiring much thought.
Perhaps it is a vital part of our nature, some seem to
adapt well, while others are inspired to pierce through
trails and trials despite consequences.
ears/Seattle inspires much thought! well done!
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Yes, yes yes... i'm on this frame of mind, this is universal and some of us are still looking towards a path to go! Wise words here, truly translatable in my life were there is a definite crossworlds dilemma.
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