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Passage Of Time

Reflections of images
generated by an immersion of wonders,
Celebrated by a high light,
Refracted in a century of emotion,
Zealous in a perspective of what might be,
Overshadowed from reflections
that each has deep within a soul
sometimes covered in painful experience
mirrored in a past
that some would rather forget,
For a joyful future helps
redirect those lives
that each of us honor
in fellowship and friendship
held in our own making
with a unique touch
felt and kept
ina design like a fingerprint
touched by a passage of time.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 8, 2008

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    This reminds me of glimpses of past lives. Vivid imagery, yet spirialing. An interesting piece, but it does hold a great message within it.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    so true!

    "For a joyful future helps redirect those lives that each
    of us "honor" in fellowship and friendship.
    A unique touch like a fingerprint touched by a passage of
    time...."

    perhaps some may not understand this poem until they
    are through a journey...and looking back understanding,
    my gawd....i have come through a battle renewed, strong,
    a little bruised and shed...but deep within new muscles
    are empowered and sing of joyful sonnet and ballad.
    ears/Seattle
    keep writing, you have strength in your soul, that
    will inspire many!