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the PIER

Walking away

into the

emptiness of the foaming sea,

casts bitter reflections;

upon my flesh.

Still I can't help, but

to lie

upon the blade

within

the cascading nightfall.

Surrendering

my Soul of

Beguiling Love...

Hoping

that daybreak will lead me

 to another wasted Life

of 

Beautiful Darkness.

As my tears

form of

broken glass

knowing that

 our Paths together

was never

a resting place

for my heart.

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CREDIT:
"onthepier"
from deviatart.com

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  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2008

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    Wonderful Sweet Niece

    Everytime I stop by I am never disappointed . Your talent shines through your words. You have pened a lovely poem with heartfelt imagery.Hugs and smiles for you. I love the ending. Very beautiful!...

    our Paths together
    was never
    a resting place
    for my heart.

    You take care and have a WONDERFUL weekend.

    Bless You,
    Auntie Sandy



  • darell
    August 8, 2008

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    Melancholy

    Aww! this is so melancholy. The clouds of discontent
    loom in skies of bewilderment. More distant than
    the drifting sea, the heart wanders on the waves
    of loneliness and isolation. Searching for that
    perfect shore in which to cast its anchor of love.
    An exquisitely written piece that calls in the
    darkness. Every yearning heart to love. Nice.


  • Mallig gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Dark and lovely! I really liked "casts bitter reflections upon my flesh." Best of luck in the contest!


  • wattle silver member
    August 4, 2008

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    An Ephiphany moment. They're always the most memorable. Thank you Southern Belle.


  • ennovy silver member
    August 3, 2008

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    Boom! you just blew up before my eyes and I love the word use...an awesome write & read.....g'momma


  • LovetimesLove
    August 3, 2008

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    champange always best served cold for 2 in lovely glasses as shown But...don't drink b4 ur services


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    http://s290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Dark/?action=view¤t=0_onthepier.jpg

    here is the link to your prompt. if you don't like it let me know you have one more chance.

    kat

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