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Orgasmic Oceans

Flames of orange fire
flick through my body
burning hot like molten lava,
boiling the blood
steaming the senses,
as thoughts of you
fill my being.

I await your return
as I sit on shores of sensuality,
liquid dreams mold my mind
hardened edges of excitement
fill my essence,
as darkness threatens to overtake
and I succumb fully,
to orgasmic oceans
that surround me.

Author notes

http://s290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Dark/?action=view¤t=0_awaitingthenight.jpg

I may work on this more....lol

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    Wow!!! Love this...

    Deep, dark & sensual...
    Great descriptive narrative, rhythm & flow...
    Felt it, Lived it, Loved it!!!
    Well done!!!


    • aboomer silver member
      August 16, 2008

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      Thank you so much 'Fritz O shennick' for reading, your lovely comment and clappies on 'orgasmic oceans'. I am pleased you enjoyed this.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    Wow! this is sensual
    and dark (two of my favorite
    words together)
    Gorgeous imagery!
    Superb word choices!
    Love this!!!!
    ~Pastel


    • aboomer silver member
      August 6, 2008
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      Thank you so much Pastel for your wonderful comment on 'orgasmic oceans' - I am so pleased you enjoyed it.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Wow, sensual and dark! The imagery here is gorgeous hunni, you have done a beautiful picture so much justice. A stunning piece...good luck in the contest


    • aboomer silver member
      August 5, 2008
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      Thank you so much 'LadyD' - so pleased you enjoyed 'orgasmic oceans'.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Ohh that pic is pretty.. and I love the sensuality within your write!! Beautifully imagery and feeling in this! Good luck!


    • aboomer silver member
      August 4, 2008
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      Thank you kiwi - so glad you enjoyed 'orgasmic oceans'.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    Wow, what an excellent sensual poem. I love where you took the prompt. the imagery that you used throughout this poem is vivid. Fantastic job.

    good luck

    kat


  • ebaby
    August 3, 2008

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    MMm I knew I loved the Ocean, and now to see this Orgasmic Oceans, I now know why!


    • aboomer silver member
      August 3, 2008
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      lol - thank you 'ebaby' - glad you enjoyed.
      I LOVE the oceans


  • azlyn gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    A very nice ocean to visit I would say!!! Very sensual verse!!!

    Best of luck!!!


    Az

  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 3, 2008
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    http://s290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Dark/?action=view¤t=0_awaitingthenight.jpg

    here is the link to your prompt. you have one more chance. if you don't like this one let me know.


    kat


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 3, 2008
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    yeah!!!! I'll be nice I promise

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