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The Crows Break me

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I fall...

for the last time

 

                 into the darkness

 

                              my soul      {escaping}

 

                              flying free

                              with no direction

                              chaos in flight

 

Dark wings that

held me safe...

reach for the fading sun

flee to the eye of the storm

looking for a new host

Shining eyes that...

helped me see

look skyward

searching for the calm

seeking a fresh kill

 

My children

 

leave me now

 

                 as I fall 

 

                              into the darkness

 

                                                     my soul   {exhausted}

 

                                                              embraces the

 

 

                                                             night...                 

Author notes

The crows break me by unknown artist...


My first write in a while so please excuse the rough work here...

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Comments

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  • beautifuldisaster
    December 27, 2008

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    i like the beginning of this piece, saying that your done being down, and that your ready for the freedom of happiness. thats what i get just from the beginning but i may we way off base. *laughs*
    great write

    -shelley


  • Valley Girl silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    WOW! You have such a talent for making writes come to life. It is as if the reader is right there witnessing what is taking place! This is such a dark and sad write! Congrats on the HM once again! ♥


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Wow, you have breathed life into a gorgeous picture. A brilliant piece, I sure have missed reading you! A dark delight to read...meh, rough indeed!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 4, 2008
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    Oooo perfect for that pic! Dark and sad and a feeling of desolate surrender to the night!!


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    This poem my dear, is great. It does the picture justice, and is well organized to get the point across.

    I love the layout you have done with this.

    Your Lady,

    Riftkin


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    http://s290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Dark/?action=view¤t=thecrowsbreakme.jpg

    you know when you don't decide, you take your chances.. lol

    here is the link for your prompt. if you don't like it let me know..

    kat

  • Angelflower
    August 3, 2008
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    Lol. you can't be like me and not choose!! not fair!!


    • Unsigned gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      Well I can't choose because I am just so veryyyyyyy Darkkkkkkkkkkk...lol.......BOOOO~!!!!!!!

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