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"Kindness"

If kindness was only like a sunny smile
Costing so little in giving
But it scattered the night
Like a morning light
Making the days worth living.

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  • Liquid memories
    August 17, 2008
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    I feel its that simple, but many have difficult sharing that sunny smile. good write.

  • Dobar Dan
    August 9, 2008
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    This Could Be A Limerick

    Just need to change the rhyme - try it - Joe

  • Dobar Dan
    August 9, 2008
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    You Got It

    A smile costs so little - nothing at all really but can make someones day = I like the rhyme and flow of this poem - you did great - keep on keeping on - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) --------------------------- smiles

  • Dobar Dan
    August 4, 2008

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    Right On

    Very nice - a smile costs nothing yet it brightens our day errrrr and night too - this is a great write - I likr the rhyme and flow and the story - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) ------------------------------- smile -hagd