For years eyes have danced
Over skin that wasn’t our to touch
Smiles; glances have been stolen
As we have past each other
In a haze that can only be called love
In our own little world
Wanted touch
Never felt
Insucureness frosted loves gaze
Unable to see
That through all her imperfections
She is still loved
And held within his arms
Now free to explore
Her worrying lips find his
Only to fall into the softness
And the knowledge
That the heart that beats against her
Holds her in its heart
As he is held within hers
Allowed to dream once again
Her gaze never leaves his
After all what was once a dream
Is now the truth
Author notes
ok here it is mama
i love you
im in love 
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A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt Contest!! Big Points!!! by Sweet Impatience.
1350 points, ended August 14, 2008, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?
Comments
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OK, my collab has commented but may I suggest you go back very quickly and check for tense and grammar? It really will help come time to make the final decision.
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awww this is such a beatiful and gorgeous write and your words really does fit the picture with such deep meaning and emotion. well done beautifully.
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aww wow..this is just so gorgeous
sissy i love it, im so happy cause you seem happy, woohooo, hehe
so good luck in the contest and take care
love you, Stephanie ♥
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~waits for a prompt and reads Emmys write~...
oh...isn't being in Love a wonderful feeling....such a high..
Wonderful my small one but check the second line our should be ours??
Dad
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this is so beautiful, and I am so so happy for you.. my shadow angel is in love, that makes me so very happy.. I'm smiling can't you see...
You are a very beautiful young lady, your heart shines though this poem. your happiness & love jumps right off the page..
excellent take on the prompt & Fantastic poem
good luck
kat
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yay!! this is really beautiful hun!!! I really loved this!! it's amazing and wonderfully romantic and yeah!! I'm so glad your in love hun!!! he better treat you right too!! because if he doesn't I'll find him!! and make him very sorry! lol.. Love you my Shadow Angel!! you did great!! best of luck!
Angel
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Yay!!! love love love is in the air!! lol.
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ok finshed writtin
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http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20love/MissykBerry/GothLove.jpg?o=210
here is the link for your prompt. if you don't like it just let me know.
kat
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