Drape thy-self in sorrow black?
Think not the past misery lost,
You in the caveat of fixed cost
Fingers learn the helpless slack.
Incline not your wishes
The luster understand
Glamour’s silken land
Stretch now the kisses?
Bent of the eye to think
Red, whispers your lips
Who befriends and tips
Or place the missing link.
Oh! the two-bit front teeth
Hubby need’s u- knee-form.
Disco is an AP lover’s norm
Ascertain learn to see-th-e?
Con a muse not definitely.
Trust your heart to the torn
Mingle with friends get worn.
Game-tame cries positively.
I can love, wink and kick
Burn like the candle wick
Know that wasn’t my trick
Woo you to an erotic flick.
Crazy why you won’t click
Loved many to gim-mick
Wild cat carries the stick
But honey be fair to lick.
Miss the twist I speak
Castle darkened in dew
Reflection quite a few
Never saw you, weak.
Be morning glory’s sheen
Men lovers laugh to keep
Lost one? don’t you weep
In line another battle seen.
Men are men no stew
Enemy in sight a cue
Say be mine per-sue
Propose to me, mew
That was real divine the view
Ask to muse pay back a due
Earn wealth? O! have no clue
Nonentity thought you er’new.
First to enter am last one out;
Night Bar of course you lout.
Stepped you feet the other day
Casino in mind was going nay?
Seen the strip and caress tease
That leg meshed the pole to clash.
Slid heavens to desperate hell
Bad! Bad! thought you be sad?
These no loops
You in the soup?
Ay! Ay! agree:
I spot it all fine.
No paparazzi scoop just be mine.
Squeeze words let the muse define.
Author notes
http://dollydaydream.deviantart.com/art/A-Way-Out-10182375
My poem links two:-
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4529695
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4523398
A contest entry
- Ok..Bored and lonely.. (Guys only) by Angelflower.
490 points, ended August 17, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #125 Turn that green into gold by daviscth.
300 points, ended August 25, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The links cannot be to someone on Allpoetry.
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You did a wonderful job composing this piece. The imagery is really great. Thank you for posting in my conbtest.
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Well.. I must say this was a hard read for me because I have such a short attention span.. But you caught my attention by your words and I read the whole thing!! bravo! on that one.. Thank you very much for writing something so unique for this contest! and I'd say you did such a wonderful job with that picture.. Thank you very much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!!
Angel
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Thanks
It is great to get the HM for the poem.
Hope to put something better in your future contest.
Of course I knew you would not accept the proposal of a person who earns nothing, goes to the bar drunk, visits casinos and visits pole dances with ease.
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Oh it wasn't that!!! I didn't even know that stuff so I can't say that was what made me not choose you..
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Sorry
I know the gold is excellent.
I love to joke, please forgive if I had been in your place I would just have laughed and laughed.
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I have the attention span of a goldfish..but this was excellent. Well penned.... Good luck
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thank you.
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Cute picture! Good luck
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