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Souls Gather

Come to me,
I will write your name,
You will die,
But misery is finished,

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  • movedon
    August 3, 2008

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    Definitely outside the box, in aggreance with the other commentor, but very good. I enjoyed this piece; thanks for sharing.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    August 3, 2008

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    Interesting take on the prompt....I love your outside of the box thinking...

    Well done and good luck