kneeling on the edge of aspiration
watching life slowly go by,
~wishing on that brighest star~
from somewhere...
out there...
across dreamland's galaxy,
fulfillment will one day come.
anticipation chimes fervently
on endeavor's breeze,
spinning deep yearnings
into possibility's reach.
Author notes
Option #4
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b185/specialStar/1105574fab2kerfm9.gif
A contest entry
- Peace filled Poetry in motion ~ Picture Prompted Contest by Stardust-luvr.
2250 points, ended September 6, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful indeed! I truly love your last stanza! It's just perfect for that picture
All the best with this gorgeous piece!
gaylene
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oh now this was just wonderfully written. A favorite of mine I have to say. I loved the picture too. She's so cute just sitting there out amongst the stars. Great Job and I'd love to read more just like this one
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
Linda
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you painted an incredible image with your vocabulary and style used. we often may find ourselves wishing upon the stars in times of disdain in hopes of a sense of soul-filled peace as we traverse on a dreamland journey of passionate wonder. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx
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Thank you for your kind comment and for HM. I enjoyed your contest.
Linda
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YES
This was a beautifully written piece. A great use of vocabulary and so full of love and desire. Bravo You started out strong then delivered a knockout at the end. Great job, Boog
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Thank you for the very kind comment. Very sweet of you.
Linda
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Beautifully done, so simplistic in the beginning then a stunning vocabulary change in the end. Nicely done.
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Thank you for the kind comment. It is much appreciated.
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Excellent
Wow, terrific take on the picture So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you bro
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beautiful write... captured the prompt eloquently... we all need stars to wish upon huh... good luck
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Yep, we do need those stars to wish upon
Thank you for the kind comment.
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You have reached out and taken me for a journey right inside this beautiful picture. A breath taking write for sure. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings, Patty
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Thanks my friend..I'm happy you enjoyed the read.
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Aww how glorious sis! "endeavor's breeze" and "possibility's reach" are such wonderful phrases!
That pic is beautiful and so is your write for it!
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I deeply appreciate your encouragement and kindness, thank you sis.
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I really can't say anything. You've taken my breath away with this masterful work. There are to many favorite parts here to list just one.
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Do you need CPR?
Thank you my dear friend for your kind words. You are so sweet.
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What a gorgeous and enchanting
piece you have penned here. You
did a wonderful job bringing this
picture to life with your words.
I love all of the imagery in this.
Bravo and keep up the wonderful
work here! Good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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Thank you for such a touching comment. Means alot to me.. so glad you enjoyed the read.
Linda
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Wonderfully Enchanting!
Wonderfully Enchanting! this is so lovely, and well worth a gold so good luck in the contest, hope you win!
Love the bit that goes:
"kneeling on the edge of aspiration watching life slowly go by,
~wishing on that brighest star~"
That is just so lovely. What fabulous sentiments and poetic graphics too, fabulous rad, and again, another masterpiece, showcasing your phenomenal talent. Well done, love it, bravo!
Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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You are too kind, deeply appreciated, thank you for the lovely comment.
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Reading my mind again?
You do that way to often!! hehe.... and you used those words again You really are in my mind Sis!
But this is, truly fantastic!!! Amazing... and anything else that goes with it!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Uh oh what words did I use? Do I have to go to that darn naughty corner AGAIN
Thank you sis for your always sweet comments.
and love
Linda
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Wistful yearnings......sigh
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One can always dream, huh? Thank you for the comment.
Linda
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