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Promises


There they are
made...
and broken
shared...
and never kept,
Is that what promises are ?
Like the one I made with you ?
You said it couldn't be helped,
But you're not hurting
like I am,
Trust to me
is a part of love,
And my trust
for you
doesn't exist....
anymore,
So go
and tell your twisted lies
to someone else,
As I cry for now
and live on
with my life,
Goodbye...
and don't come back !

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  • cheaphotelsign
    August 27

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    quite a saddening write...very textured with emotion...an intense hurt...a passionate plea for the severing of a dead limb...wise words of solid truth in this...i actually teared up a bit as i read...call me emotional, but i know this feeling...i hope this was theraputic for you...a powerful message for all, within this...well done