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Me

I am lightning
shouting from the storm
in laughter

a soothing breeze
easing a scorching
southern summer day

an echo calling
across the water

so you won't be alone

the smile

of the cresent moon

shining away the darkness

flowers bursting
after a long chill
offering you a smile

the song in the night

a serenade for your dance

a lullybye for rest

some say I am complex
but I am simple...

I am of love

A contest entry

Show Me Your Self Portrait...PIF by NurseyPoo. 1275 points, ended September 7, 17 entries
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Endeavor
August 11
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Just reading again

Rick
Myjoy
August 4

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We are woman, and under the tough skin, and what the world will make us....we are just that LOVE! Mother earth at her best, to recreate and protect. Good luck, I really enjoyed the metaphors!
NurseyPoo
August 3
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Very nice write. I will comment more when judging. Thank you for the entry.~Poo~
sunshinegirl
August 3

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Sis,

This one...... WOW! you said everything I have said of another, and what I like to think of them as, and myself for them... This is pure magic sis!! You have outdone yourself in this one!

Best of luck in this contest!

and love

Nyetta
Endeavor
August 3

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Excellent
the song in the night
a serenade for your dance
a lullybye for rest
some say I am complex
but I am simple
I am of love

I think you did very well with this
I am still wondering what to write

I think the ending is excellent
You are these things

Rick
azlyn
August 2

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Perfect...
This is YOU! So sweetly and so wonderfully YOU!

How blessed am I to know this?

Love You~
Sue