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Thine Eyes

Only to touch with thine eyes,
Forever see
with thy heart,
Dream of those rainbows
that is celebrated in paradise,
To seem in another place
and another time
a soul begets those tears
in a cry for help,
Morns in silence
only to reach for the stars,
Quiet in its love,
Those secrets held in a miracle of time,
Yet the gift that has been given
is the only chance in eyes
that is assured by a welcome.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 8, 2008

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    I like the overall feel of this one. There are some lovely images here, but it loses me just a bit in the center. Like a random stream of images, perhpas that is intentional but I admit, I got lost. I'm sorry.