hold me.
forgive this body
for being an ocean,
that washes over all hearts.
at times drowning them
though some lucky lungs are filled
with silver song.
understand that this siren maiden
makes mistakes,
confused by sky scraper reality.
become a man with questions
about my earth, become a gardener
who can dig into my dark soil.
oceans, skies and earth
separate souls
and unify hearts. please,
find my truth
and take drunk myths away.
be with me
even if we can not
be together.
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criticize.
peace to all ~flight
honesty
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can i fix it and renter?
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I would say yes but the contest closed last night.
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all rules aside, what did you think of the actual
content of the poem? peace to all ~flight
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