Love is not you.
Love is not what you do to me.
Love is not painful.
Love is something you'll never see.
Love shouldn't make you scared.
Love shouldn't make you hurt.
Love shouldn't leave you scarred,
Love shouldn't leave you suffering.
Love should make you high.
Love should keep you happy.
Love should do wonders to your soul and body,
Not leave you battered and beaten.
Love is so good, so beautiful,
So sweet, so perfect!
Love is everything good and pure,
Unconditional, and unending.
Love is not you.
Love is not what you do to me.
Love is my name.
Don't you see?
So what is love, you ask me?
Love is my name;
Love is ME!
Love is Everything Sweet!
A contest entry
- What is True Love anyway? by darell.
500 points, ended August 16, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very easy flowing
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really like this and i love the last stanza its excellent, well done you!
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efing love
sometimes we fall for those who don't know how to love one back.
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awsomess!!
this is wonderfull areil i love it it show even what ppl say or do to u the 1 that knows and loves u best is and always should be you out of all the ppl in the world u know this is a very lovley poem and i wished u were a finalest as well love ya bunchess!! and keep up with the awsomess work!! -
cute.
thanks for adding me.
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Nice
A truthful confession of love uttered
from the earnest of a broken heart.
At least this is this feeling I get from
this lovely poem. Love is tough sometimes.
Especially when two people are not on
one accord. Nicely done
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Very nice
You also pretty much covered what love isn't also. As I was read it brought to mind The anti-Christ only of love. And I also applaud you for saying in your last stanza "Love is Me." Great Confidence there....very good, and good luck in the contest.
WoodsonRoundtree
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anit-christ?? hmm, never thought about it like that. and thnx!!
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Outstanding
I think you have covered just about everything that love is in this poem. I liked the repetition and thought it flowed very well. This is a thoughtful poem that makes me dream of love. Best of luck in the contest.
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