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She Muffles The Sound

She muffles the sound
So no one can hear.
She tare at her skin
To hide her tears.

She can feel bits of her soul
Braking off and disappearing
She can feel her soul
Whithering and dying.

She can feel her head
Screaming and crying
Her body, bloody
Her heart, cold.

She muffles the sound
So no one can hear.
She hides the pain
So no one can see.
Her soul, lost
Her heart, weak.

She muffles the sound
So no one can hear
She turns away
As she feels her heart slowly fade.

She muffles the sound
To her last remaining breath
So no one can hear
Those spoken words as she left.

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7-31-08

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  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    August 19, 2008
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    This is real and I like that. It's deep and true. Very good work. Keep it up!!!

    {Tasha}


  • ForeverForgotten
    August 7, 2008
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    Meaning to this? You or someone else???