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Web of Love


This heart caught in the web,
may not want to be there,
trapped by strings attached,
by someone who doesn’t care.

Simplicity for books,
written for the price of romance,
injected into your mind,
to create a song and dance.

The quality of love,
does not have boundaries,
it is left to the human mind,
in the turmoil of life’s foundries.

Nature moves in ways,
we all can not describe,
in exchange of vows deliberate,
we join another tribe.

Blockbuster love stories,
shall train the human mind,
telling of a whole new truth,
disguised in a way to be kind.






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  • Katie Lazette
    September 7, 2008

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    Good write my friend. I hope you have someone to make beautiful musice with. Enjoyed reading your poem. Katie


  • trekkergirl
    August 31, 2008
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    very good write. Thanks for sharing


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 23, 2008

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    well thought and spoken in so many truths as sadly the hearts get broken as well as the spirit. I know I too have often been trappd in the dreaded thoughts of the broken turmoils of love and often wondering -why? but in time we move on and grow. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx


  • Patpowers silver member
    August 3, 2008

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    Way to go Karl!

    Loved this latest work here Karl. Good expression presented in this! You are one of the best on this!! THANKS!!


    • Topaze gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      Thank you my friend, I am glad you enjoyed this piece, my best wishes always.

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